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State: Minnesota

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The Myth of the Fly Wednesday, November 02, 2005

He said he loved her.
Somehow, this time, the words
knew the path through the thick
shadow green jungles to her heart.
His eyes were masked in earnest,
with the most subtle of adornments
she gazed at him, daring herself to fly.

The spider spun a lavender web, scented
with a lily's breath, awaiting his love.
She gingerly approached her edge...
and leaped for all the gods to see
He would be her Orpheus, guiding her
toward the light! Her shrouds would fall
away, like leaves in August
because this time, he would not turn around.
He would not turn, turn, turn away
He would not

stay
she wondered
not stay, he said
'cannot stay'
she remembered
as he sliced his fingertips
across her moist reddened cheek

as she lay in her lavender web
the gods sent a sprinkle of rain
each drop that landed on her web
remained, and he, her black Orpheus
would not, could not see
the shimmering diamonds surrounding her
mile after mile behind him.




you do write some fantastic tales
if you'd like to talk, my im is on my home page
 [The Marcosi]
11/2/2005 12:22:27 PM
I just noticed you added more entries. I like this one the most, because it makes beautiful images in my mind. I really love your writing.. [lovablechica07] 11/4/2005 4:41:15 PM
By the way.... "me gusta tu poema muy mucho. Eres creativo y bien piensas. Es un placer a leer".... means "I like your poem very much. It's creative and well thought out. It was a pleasure to read" lol [lovablechica07] 11/20/2005 9:36:24 AM
Wonderful imagery. I really enjoyed this. [mr. goth glam] 11/26/2005 12:15:28 AM
I like your writing on the cover page. It makes me want a garden. :) [lovablechica07] 1/5/2006 7:24:56 PM
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