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You Look Like I Need A Drink
by Letters_To_God
Location: On My Own
Age: 26    Sex : M

An Hour Of Wasted Time and Expression 6/10/2005

Life is too short for us to worry about this and that

Yet I misunderstand all things you say

Which leads to false conclusions and wasted days

Spent 25 hours a day thinking of you

But it's just another misconception burning deep within

Could you point me in the direction of the escape route?

Because with each turn I feel myself wandering the same path

Maybe someday you'll truely understand all that has been said

If your mind could follow mine, you'd be just as lost as I am

A striped shirt, white collar fist to the face

Like a .45 caliber love letter straight from my heart

Nearly missing with bad intentions and unintentional deceptions

Forgive me if these words have led you astray, their meaning is more effective than I can emit

And all I want is to continue like this

Choose your side, and I'll choose mine

Isn't it strange...

That tears of joy are no different than tears of sorrow?

Still I find no difference between today and tomorrow

Just like I find no significance in this...

A worthless expression of feeling that just continues to tear the seams

Leave me a happy feeling, cause I'll need it in the morning

Or maybe keep it to yourself, I'm sure you'll need the uplifting spirit someday

Wasted another hour thinking of you




I'm no poet.

But it needs work.

It doesn't flow much, or peak the interest of the reader. And most of your lines are too cliqued. [Crowquill]

6/13/2005 10:24:08 AM
Hey Nick- long time no talk- my mom said that she saw you at graduation. I just wanted to see how you were. Congrats on graduating. Hope to hear from you later-

Staci

 [§weetangel]

6/28/2005 1:27:35 AM
Hey bro, I just got a strange urge to go back to this site. Its been a strange revisit, man alot of words were typed on this and that, and i dont regret any. We need to chill for a bit soon bro. Take it easy.

Blood bro-Jared 

6/29/2005 2:24:13 AM
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