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Orphial Doctrine
by AcidKiss

  

I'll Scream Until My Words Collapse 1/23/2005

Quiet now-
The solomn pitter patter of flawless sky filled tears
shatters our ugly shell of an excuse for indecency-
That dry swallow
And familiar sting of pinching that sliver of flesh back together
Another battle scar for the collection-
Another night passed by
Without so much as a thank you for the attempt of eternal sleep...


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And wear your battle scars with pride...

~* [Eyes Painted Red]

1/23/2005 3:34:30 PM
ryn: otep tatoos? thats farking awesome! [Notorious F.A.G] 1/23/2005 8:59:21 PM
I really like this one. :^) [~Black Days~] 1/23/2005 11:19:20 PM
love that last line-- [exist] 1/24/2005 10:52:13 AM
ooo i like that...lotsa imagery...cool-sounding words..very awesome :o)

thanx for the note btw! glad u liked my lil song! [Split-Second]

1/24/2005 4:20:46 PM
hey. thanks for the notes. i love your entries very well written :-) nmb  [breakmyself_x] 1/24/2005 9:13:04 PM
I'm glad someone does.... ur poetry was beautiful, btw =-) [Perfect_Circle66] 1/25/2005 6:36:04 PM
I felt that on so many levels.. c'est merveilleux.

RYN: I understand what you mean.. it's always been that way for me as well. No matter how many lists I make, it's all just a vain powerplay on my part.

But it still gives me hope somehow. Thank you. :)

 [bleedingviolet]

1/26/2005 10:49:42 PM
i'd directly comment on the poem, but it already speaks for it's self. i have felt like that a few times too many also [an abstract concept] 2/6/2005 2:30:56 AM
oh man i miss you.

email me

call me

i love you and hope you're doing well. [Mother says I'm fine]

2/10/2005 2:06:57 PM


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