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Poetically Speaking...
by ~*HiDdEnSoUl*~
Location: The brink of sanity,
Age: 20    Sex : F

In The Fading Light 4/29/2006

In the fading light,

They stood together

One last time

To say goodbye forever

 

His face of stone,

Hers a fake smile

But their eyes told the truth

Of what their masks hid all the while

 

In the fading light, they embraced gently

As if to say, we'll be together again

As if in defiance of the truth

That this was really the end

 

But in the fading light,

The masks fell

She looked up, he looked down

And in the fading light, the masks fell

 

"I love you."

"Don't say it!"

"I need you!"

"Don't think it!"

 

In the fading light,

A forbidden love finally revealed

A love that couldn't be smothered

A love that couldn't be killed

 

"I love you!"

"You musn't say it!"

"I need you!"

"You musn't think it!"

 

In the fading light, he saw her tears

Of what only her heart's pain could bring 

And in the fading light, he saw her tears, and finally understood. 

Understood Everything.

 

 



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Don't tell me a thing!!

I want to read it this summer. [HelloAmi]

4/29/2006 2:20:05 PM
:P

It's OK. Now I really want to read it. [HelloAmi]

4/29/2006 5:37:58 PM
That is a beautiful poem.

L'erica [SlitMeDNotA]

4/29/2006 8:18:19 PM
ohhh...that was beautiful

ryn: chimps are a lovely example!

lex [SilentlyShattered]

4/29/2006 9:19:11 PM
Heh. Kind of like mine.

Oh well.

It's perty.♥

 [OMFG_Shelbypants]
4/30/2006 12:19:46 AM
Its nice but a fairly indolent poem, it needs some work but then you are 13. I think it is just a bit unreal because life isnt like that.

thankyou for your comment ^^ it would be great if you could criticise my poetry though, because I love criticism^^

x [Bleﮎﮎ]

4/30/2006 11:34:47 AM
I really like that poem, it's good. =)

Thanks for your note
 [Romantical:Dream:Guy]

4/30/2006 11:40:05 AM
i'm not sure why, but this almost made me cry.

shelby [snails]

4/30/2006 4:55:43 PM
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