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Worlds Disgrace Wednesday, June 13, 2012



Lonely day turns lonely night
lonely world crowded tight
echoes ring this lonely place
saddened lonely human race

Darkened alleys darkened souls
darkened hearts filled with coal
destitute in putrid streams
lonely lives devoid of dreams

Crouching masses in time of war
filled with fear and homes no more
driven from their sacred place
forgotten souls our worlds disgrace

Lonely eyes in their reflection
saddened earth's imperfection
broken heart and tearless eyes
unheard endless silent cries

 



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RYN: thanks <3
and beautiful as always
~~~> [Skikkles911]
6/13/2012 10:51:29 AM
Have you ever written haikus? 5 7 5. You'd probably enjoy it, from time to time, if you haven't already. Ofcourse, you can do no wrong with your work, and hopefully you will always be your harshest critic. ;D [Teh wit-e radbit.] 6/13/2012 1:25:35 PM
this is a moving poem. Great job! [Shayche] 6/14/2012 4:18:20 AM
Ryn: thanks. :-) you completely
Wrong tho :-p  [*Moonglow*]
6/17/2012 11:45:59 AM
ryn: so glad you like my entrys. Not many ppl do and your note especially the second last one was nice to read as ppl have been so negative about the last 2 entries.

Love this as always, seriously wish i was as talented as you.

Hugs x [♥Realta]
6/21/2012 5:33:39 PM
:(
sad but good poem...  [ninnoc]
7/8/2012 12:28:45 AM
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