i wanted to share some of my lyrics and see what you guys think.
i have been holding on
watching you change
and I try to stay strong
while I stay the same
I watch you by her side
I’m skating on thin ice
this is how is feels to be replaced
don’t know why but the look on your face
makes me wish we could go back
back before you met her yeah
it just can’t wait
because i don’t want to lose you
i don’t wanna be replaced
I’ve been yelling at the stars
since we said goodbye
i don’t know who are
since you moved on with your life
i don’t know why but i miss the look on your face
from before she stood in my place
so when you look back at me
are you ever flooded with the memories?
when you turn around,
do you feel like you’ve been found?
i don’t know why it feels like a game
maybe i just don’t wanna be replaced.
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