Quiet Death
Inhaling deeply
the warm air stale
sleeping softly
waxy lips blue.
Darkness filled eyes
dreams never found
in a forever
starless night.
Silently sneaking
death finds home
a stilled heart.
I just wanted to reassure my readers I am not feeling suicidal.. It was not written about my current feelings, while I did use the rememberance of old feelings I am not feeling depressed.
that is beautiful…you have a real talent
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random: Wow… that is very good.
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wow that is amazing. come to my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/104736776 I have some poetry up, but I daresay it’s not as good as yours.
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that is fabulous!!!
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Claire got it! Stem cell is barely making it.
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Powerful poem!
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i had a nightmare about you.
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