More help needed

Yup.

I’ve got one story that I’ve just edited for a competition and another, for another comp, that I’ve just written.

I would like feedback on them both.

If you are able to help (and, please bear in mind that the closing date for one of the comps is the 16th, so I really need it back asap) drop me a note and let me know.

Will
 

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May 5, 2010

RYN: “It didn’t let me add a message to my friends request…” A half-dozen ODers have sent me friend requests and none of them have left their names… so I’ve been guessing and so far I’m 6 for 6! *happy dance* (I’m so good that I even figured out who you were BEFORE I could access your profile and see the BARROWMAN!!! icon that would have tipped me off! *grins*) 🙂 ~Shady

May 5, 2010

RYN: “It didn’t let me add a message to my friends request…” A half-dozen ODers have sent me friend requests and none of them have left their names… so I’ve been guessing and so far I’m 6 for 6! *happy dance* (I’m so good that I even figured out who you were BEFORE I could access your profile and see the BARROWMAN!!! icon that would have tipped me off! *grins*) 🙂 ~Shady

May 5, 2010

RYN: “It didn’t let me add a message to my friends request…” A half-dozen ODers have sent me friend requests and none of them have left their names… so I’ve been guessing and so far I’m 6 for 6! *happy dance* (I’m so good that I even figured out who you were BEFORE I could access your profile and see the BARROWMAN!!! icon that would have tipped me off! *grins*) 🙂 ~Shady

May 5, 2010

RYN: “It didn’t let me add a message to my friends request…” A half-dozen ODers have sent me friend requests and none of them have left their names… so I’ve been guessing and so far I’m 6 for 6! *happy dance* (I’m so good that I even figured out who you were BEFORE I could access your profile and see the BARROWMAN!!! icon that would have tipped me off! *grins*) 🙂 ~Shady

email it – mgjb@live.co.uk

email it – mgjb@live.co.uk

email it – mgjb@live.co.uk

email it – mgjb@live.co.uk

May 5, 2010

*flips back and forth between two windows* Wait… you can cross-post from OD to fb? Hrm… I’m gonna have to play with that. RYN: “Oooh, Ste! He just kinda disappeared.” He’s in college now and getting ready to graduate… it blows my mind, I think he was only thirteen when we first met. *shakes head* I feel so old!

May 5, 2010

*flips back and forth between two windows* Wait… you can cross-post from OD to fb? Hrm… I’m gonna have to play with that. RYN: “Oooh, Ste! He just kinda disappeared.” He’s in college now and getting ready to graduate… it blows my mind, I think he was only thirteen when we first met. *shakes head* I feel so old!

May 5, 2010

*flips back and forth between two windows* Wait… you can cross-post from OD to fb? Hrm… I’m gonna have to play with that. RYN: “Oooh, Ste! He just kinda disappeared.” He’s in college now and getting ready to graduate… it blows my mind, I think he was only thirteen when we first met. *shakes head* I feel so old!

May 5, 2010

*flips back and forth between two windows* Wait… you can cross-post from OD to fb? Hrm… I’m gonna have to play with that. RYN: “Oooh, Ste! He just kinda disappeared.” He’s in college now and getting ready to graduate… it blows my mind, I think he was only thirteen when we first met. *shakes head* I feel so old!